2010-03-25

Seven : Update #9

So, another week, another chapter.

Added
- Chapter 1.09: David completes his mission and gets his nickname.

With this, Day 4 comes to an end. Only 3 more to go until the end of the beginning for David. What do those days have in store? And what is all of this preparing him for? Keep reading to find out!

Enjoy!

2010-03-18

NYC: Update #10

Okay, so lately I've been a lazy slug and not working on Seven Days as much as I should. Sometimes I am just not motivated to write and it's hard to force creativity. So, I thought I would share something else!

Remember when I pondered about NYC updates? Well I actually did some! So, instead of loosing another week to my procrastination, I thought I would at least put something out and post my NYC updates (officially marking the beginning of my Draft #2 updates).

Updated
- Added a paragraph which provides more info on the OWO. [Ch. 1] (This will be explored further in other areas.)
- Wolf catches Hank and gets a lead on Jill's whereabouts; then follows up on it. [Ch. 5 & 6]
- Wolf spots and kills Hank in the assault on The Father's place. (Apparently, Wolf said he was going to do this but it never happened for some reason.) [Ch. 13]

Enjoy!

2010-03-17

NYC in Black & White

First of all... Happy St. Patrick's Day!

Now, today's post isn't really related to St. Patrick's Day but I thought this was cool and wanted to share it with all of you.

Historical photos of NYC in B&W. The page takes a while to load so give it some time.

It's pretty cool to see these old photos and compare them to new images and the Google Maps view of the city and see how much has changed over the years.

2010-03-11

Seven: Update #8

Okay, finally another update! Sorry for the breaks the past few weeks. Hopefully, I can back into the swing of things and back to my regular scheduale. Now on to what's new this week.

Added
Chapter 1.08: David takes another type of specail test as we get to out literary hump day.

Enjoy!

2010-02-25

Seven: Update #7

Wow! Finally an update this week. This update one has been on the list for a few weeks but I finally got around to it. And the new chapter turned out to be another hard one to break into. (That's why there wasn't an update last week, so sorry for that.) I think based on what the chapter is really about is something that I never went through back in high school. Also, its just not where my head has been lately, so it was hard to get into the mood to write. Anyway, here's the details:

Updated
Chapter 1.04: David remembers something else he needs to do before heading out to school: email his friend Kurt. Also, added a better segue leading into David's surgery after the accident.

Added
Chapter 1.07: David takes his girlfriend, Kim, to the school dance... something he's more anxious about than going hunting with his grandfather.

Enjoy!

2010-02-16

Movie Posters Redone

Being an artist and a movie guy, I really dig this:

Movie Posters Remade
by Olly Moss. If you like these, you can check out more of his art on his site here. It's all pretty cool stuff.

2010-02-13

Video Corner 02

Video Corner is a segment I use to share some cool and/or funny videos I've discovered on the grand and vast internets.

Both vidoes are mash ups of two properties I wouldn't have thought could have been, let alone shared enough 'what-ever' to accomplish it. But these are done very well and I really enjoy them both.

This has the audio of The Dark Knight trailer played over clips from Toy Story 2. Coolness and a little hilarity ensue.

This one is really cool. Clips of various Bert & Ernie episodes are played to M.O.P.'s song Ante Up. This video was kind of my introduction to hardcore hip hop and I really liked it, so I bought the album this song is on. (One more step in my explorations of various musical genres!) I think it was the similarities in hardcore hip hop I noticed from hard rock and metal (that I usually listen to) that helped this.

2010-02-11

Seven: Update #6

Added
Chapter 1.06: Day 3 begins with a lesson for David from his grandfather.

Also
So, I started my NYC Draft #2 updates. And as I figured, it did prove to be a bit of a distraction from my work on Seven Days. The distraction was both good and bad; while it was nice to ponder over a different section of Wolf's life, it was bad because I ended up procrastinating on chapter 1.06 until the last few days and really had to push to finish it (lately, I was keeping a week ahead). I'll probably continue the Draft #2 updates so I'll have something after finishing Seven Days (draft #1) but I'll have to try to not let it be a distraction from the current story.

Enjoy!

2010-02-04

Seven: Update #5

This week brings about the wrap of Day 2, which isn't a good day for David.


Added
Chapter 1.05: A few things happen to David at the hospital... and all of them are important. (I swear!)


This chapter was probably the hardest I've written in some time. Day 2 in general was a hard day to get through. I usually dread dialogue heavy chapters, but this wasn't that kind of hard. Day 2 is more about the things that are happening to David (mostly outside of his control), how he deals with these things, and what becomes of them. But just like the ending of NYC, I wanted to word everything just right.


I also made a few discoveries about Wolf and what Seven Days is really about (below the surface) beyond what I had planned in the summary so I'm really excited to see where this goes!


You may also see a little change in how I structure the dialogue. Inspired by a blog article on dialogue, I started using a better format. Some of my updates (to Seven Days and, eventually, NYC) in the future will reflect this style more.

2010-02-03

NYC Ponderings

NOTE: This post assumes you've already read NYC; so if you haven't yet, don't read this yet! And read NYC already!

While the story of Seven Days unfolds before us (all of us; me too... just a little ahead of all of you!), I have also been thinking of NYC a bit and some of the updates that I want/need to make. But I kind of don't want to disrupt progress on Seven Days to do them... hence my dilemma.

Some part of me thinks it would be distracting and confusing to you, the readers ...okay, and to me as well! (But it wouldn't, would it?!) Although sometimes it may be nice to take a break from the current story and focus on something else for a little bit... so I may go ahead and do them.

So, what to do then? Well, after some thinking on the matter, regardless of whether I do the updates or not (while writing Seven Days), I think I will postpone actually posting them online until after Seven Days is complete.

The whole idea of writing the entire saga (before seeking out getting it published and what-not) is to allow new ideas and concepts and sub-plots to happen (and the opportunity to implement them). In fact, I realized while writing chapter 1.02 that I hadn't really mentioned the Test later in the story (specifically in NYC); at least as far as my outline and summary are concerned. So I thought of a way to tie that in to NYC but don't want to post that bit just yet. (Sorry! And remember that I'm not Mean, I'm an Artist! It's just kind of a big reveal moment... you know what I'm talking about!)

Also, I have ideas for a few more plot points to address and include. Of course there is the political/world events stuff. But I have a few ideas on what happens earlier in the day and a false lead on Jill's whereabouts (after being kidnapped). The downside to all of these (including the reference to the Test) is that they aren't simply added like a piece that's missing. Rather, they are story elements that require adjusting to what is already there so it comes off as a cohesive story. And some of this adjusting will be more involved than others. (For example, the false lead directly affects 2 chapters, not counting any one referencing it later on. And the earlier happenings will be more of an "insert chapter" but the adjacent chapters will need a slight adjustment to make it all work.)

With that in mind, like I said before, I'll probably release all of the updates as a NYC: Draft #2 after I finish Seven Days (draft #1).

And look out for chapter 1.05 tomorrow morning with the wrap of Day 2 (which is shaping up to be the worst day of David's life; at least until that thing that happens at the end of Triumvirate).

2010-01-28

Seven: Update #4

Not much to say this morning (or tonight), so I'll get right to it.


Added
Chapter 1.04: I really don't want to give anything away (which is why there wasn't a teaser last week for this chapter), I'll just say that Day 2 begins and something happens to characters we've meet.


Notes
In my original outline (summary), I planned on 2 chapters per day. So, you can expect that format unless some days bring about new ideas while I'm writing them. This is the goal and the base line for this part, so there could possibly be more. And unlike NYC, I do have the political stuff planned so I'll be including that as well.

2010-01-21

Seven: Update #3

Another chapter is on it's way as we wrap up Day 1! Here's what's up this week:


Added
Chapter 1.03: David meets a new friend as we wrap up the first day.
Seven Days Cover Page: Added a cover page; similiar to the one for NYC.


Still no updates yet. Although I did make one to Kurt's intro (in chapter 1.02), but I updated the text before the post last week. I guess that's another benefit of my "one chapter per week, one week ahead" plan.


Enjoy!

2010-01-20

Misspellings



This is something I found quite usefull and rather funny as well. Here are a few other peices I liked:

2010-01-17

Video Corner 01

Happy Sunday everyone!

This new segment is to share some cool and/or funny videos I've discovered on the grand and vast internets.

The first is a music video from the new band Romona Falls for their first single 'I Say Fever'
John August said "At first, I thought it was just clever, but then it gets awesome."

The second is a proof of concept feature for the HALO movie that Neill Blomkamp (the director of District 9, which was an amazing film) had done. Neill was working on a HALO movie before financing fell through and it was shut down and he moved on to make District 9.

2010-01-14

Seven: Update #2

Ok, so while last week's update to Seven Days was technically Update #1, I didn't title it as such for some reason. So, I renamed the post so there isn't any confusion.


Here's what's up this week:


Added
Chapter 1.02: David finally figures out what the Test is all about (sort of).


Note
Also, some of you may have noticed that I have been putting in a few extra sentences or a paragraph at the end. This is in addition to the chapter that I said I added. So, when I put chapter 1.01 up, there were also a few lines from the beginning of chapter 1.02. This is not an error on my part but rather to provide a little teaser of what is coming up. This is something I usually do when I can. And I usually can because I am trying to keep one chapter ahead of what is posted online.


Hope you enjoy the update!

2010-01-12

Chapter Evolution (pt. 2)

This is a continuation of my process in writing a chapter. You can see part 1 here.

After the first (spelling/grammer) pass of a new chapter, I print it out and re-read it. (Mind you, I 'only' print the new chapter, nothing else!) The previous step is about preparing for this step. This re-read/edit is about polish. This is where I can see things like wording issues, points that need to be cleared up, and some sentances or paragraphs that just don't flow and need re-written. I make notes, scratch out text, write in new words that make more sense, and sometimes just note that something isn't working or I need to add more info about something. This only takes an hour or two but I think it is vital. (This step was the new component I stumbled upon hlaf way through NYC and allowed it to evolve into what it is today.) Again, printing out only the chapter is about minimizing distractions (like the rest of the story) and this gets rid of them all.

Then, I take my pages that are marked up and commented on and apply those changes to the text on the computer. Sometimes the notes are specific like use this word instead of that one. Other times, its an idea or concept that needs added so this is where that gets fleshed out. For example, in a revision in NYC, I simply commented to add more technology to a specific scene. So, my edits (notes, comments, corrections) on the page are more like a guideline for this revision.

Lastly, I do another grammer/spelling pass. This is very short as I'm just prepparing to post the new chapter. Usually, I just skim the text backwards looking at the grammar errors Word picks up on and try to reword it if possible to correct the error. Sometimes, its just a word change or a reorginazation of the sentance. Other times, I don't want to correct it as I want to keep my particular voice (like my single word sentances).

After that, I'll copy the new chapter, and any revisions to prior chapters, to the online file and create the PDF for posting.

With the chapter done, I'll usually write the blog post which introduces the update. This includes a small description of the new chapter and any revisions to existing chapters. So, on Thursday mornings, posting the story revisions and the blog post only takes about 5 minutes. And that's nice since I start work pretty early.

Well, I hope this was informative, interesting, and somewhat understandable. Until next time...


Oops, I Forgot
I forgot to include a part of my process in the previous post so I'll just include it here. Another thing I do while actually writing is to have Dictionary.com open to check spellings of words and sometimes to varify the meaning of a word. This is helpful becuase I prefer to use the correct word at first. Also, the online dictionary helps in finding other words that I could use for more variety.

2010-01-11

Chapter Evolution (pt. 1)

This post went a little longer than I planned, so I divided into two parts.

About halfway through writing NYC, I had finally honed in a set process that I now do for every chapter I write. This and the next blog entry explains (hopefully with some clarity) that process.

In the beginning, there is just a summary of the chapter. As most of you know, I have already written a summary (about 4-8 sentences) describing what is happening in the chapter.

First off, before I even begin the actual writing, I'll read the summary a few times (mostly for refresher) and then think about it and what could be happening. This last from a couple days to a couple weeks. These are ideas for specific details that could happen or details I hadn't thought of when I originally wrote the summaries. Another note about this phase, I usually do this a few chapters out, so I'm generally thinking (and to a lesser extent, planning) a few chapters in advance.

Secondly, I'll research anything I need to. This begins just before actually writing and continues, as needed, until the chapter is done. This could be anything from a specific location (like Columbia University) or a general area (like Manhattan Island). Sometimes, I'll just hunt for pages that have a lot of information (on Wikipedia) and save the links for use later, when I'm actually writing and need to reference something specific.

Then, I'll actually set out to write the chapter. This takes as short as a few hours and as much as a couple of days, but I usually don't write any more than an hour or two at a time (since I have a full time job). During this part, I'm thinking in a lot more detail and I try to work in any of the new ideas/concepts/thoughts I had previously and what ever comes from them. If the writing goes over a couple days, I'll usually re-read what I had written and make revisions as necessary (which I know doesn't help me move too quickly, but it works for me and brings me up to speed as well).

This is also the part where I may go back and revise a previous chapter if needed due to something I came up with. So, the thinking/planning and writing phases occur throughout writing the entire book. For example, if I get an idea I like better or just feel a charactor needs a differant or new intro in a previous chapter then that gets done here.

After the new chapter is written, I'll go back through and correct any misspellings and grammatical errors. This is generally done in MS Word because it picks up a lot of grammar issues, most of which I ignore but some are needed. That is in contrast to actually writing the chapter, which is done in a text editor. This is because a text file is smaller in size (on the hard drive) and takes away the distraction (in Word) of cleaning it up and making it look pretty (formatting page widths, columns, page numbers, colors, etc). It's just the words and minimal distractions.

That's all for now. Part 2 will be posted in the next day or two.

2010-01-07

The Beginning (Update #1)

Well, I have chapter 1.01 (Big Apple Bound) for all of you today! I hope you like it. It is a little slow but its necessary to get things started.

And I just finished writing chapter 1.02 (Columbia University) to keep ahead a little and I'm getting excited about it. I can't wait for you all to read it and let me know what you think.

PS: And just for fun, I added some "joke" names for future chapters (3-5). While they do have something to do with what's coming up, I definetly will not be using the titles and had a little chuckle at them.

2010-01-01

The First Step

"Every journey begins with a single step."

That's the saying and I definetly feel like I'm on the brink of a grand adventure. And I hope all of you do as well! There are 8 parts to this saga and this is just the first chapter. This chapter doesn't just set up Seven Days but also sets up the entire saga (in a way). Are you ready to begin this jounrey with me?

So, without further ado, here is Seven Days chapter 1.00 (see Chapter References). Further updates can be checked using the link in the right column.