2009-04-23

NYC: Update #3

A bit of a crazy week, but I kinda knew it was coming and had this week's update ahead of time (hence the advanced date on the doc). So here's what's in store:

Updates
- Chapter 5: Overall expansion/edits: wanted to add more info to the chapter without slowing the action down.
- Chapter 7:Added physical description of Andy.

Added
- Chapter 8: Wolf takes the initiative in finding Jill. (Did you expect anything less? Really?)
- Chapter 9: Wolf recovers Jill back. I was pretty anxious in writing this scene as it is an action scene that has been playing in my head for many years. I just hope it came out as good on paper as it played in my head.

Hope you enjoy!

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